Work – in – progress

Hyphens, indents, comma-
towed words,
creased, crossed,
questioned
till the blanks
are tossed for a recycle

mackerel cloud finding lines for a poem

– Akila G.

One thought on “Work – in – progress”

Mary Kendall says:

Very nicely done. I really like “comma-towed words.” 🙂

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July 28, 2015 at 17:10 Reply

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